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[Fanfilm] Dear Gwen

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Napisano 08 November 2005 - 19:55

Mial byc artykul i wywiadzik z rezyserem, ale nie bedzie ani jednego ani drugiego bom zapracowany jest Gunganin [Dear Maker, co to bedzie za piec lat :/] takoz miast porzucic swe zajecia pisze tylko ten oto post.

Historia, jak zapewne sie domysliliscie tyczy sie smierci Gwen. Film jest krecony przez licealistow, srednia wieku ekipy to jakies 16 lat [ale rozrzut wieku jest duzy - 15-37 lat]. Super-produkcji nie bedzie, to typowy fanfilm ze skromnym budzetem, a sami tworcy ciekawe problemy mieli, np. poczatkowo mial to byc crossover DC/Marvel i planowano wystep Batmana. zas aktorka grajaca Gwen nie chciala wziac udzialu w scenie pocalunku [swoja droga czy w koncu scena bedzie czy nie - nie wiem], takze - nie radze nastawiac sie na wielkie dzielo, a po prostu na fanowska zabawe.

Fotki znajdziecie tu [kostium Pajaka zostanie zmieniony]
http://fanboytheatre.com/id48.html

A tu macie scenariusz ;) [nie mialem czasu przeczytac]



SPIDER-MAN

DEAR GWEN

Written by:
Thomas Blevins




Opening

Pictures in black in white of a blonde haired girl are scattered across a table.

A shadow over comes the pictures as the Camera rises we see someone pull on a mask .

The camera pulls around up to the face of Spider-Man.

Spider-man
- Here we go agin.

Spider-man crawls out his window.

CUT TO:
Gwen stacey sets at harrys bedside as he's sick beyond belief.

Gwen
- Where is peter he should be here by now.

CUT TO:
Spider-Man is in an alley fighting off a few thieves.

Spider-Man
-You guys should get a real job instead of robbing a store so your Friendly Neighborhood Spiderman can
kick your nuchas around.

Spider-man throws a few kicks & punches until hes down to the last thug.

Spider-Man
-I guess its just me & you huh Romeo.

Thug
-Please dont hurt me ...Im sorry!! i wont do it again!!!

Spider-Man
-What in the world makes you think imma hurt you big boy?

Spider-Man throws his fist out like hes gonna hit him but stops . He flips the thug in the forhead & the thug just faints.
Spider-Man
-Well time to take out the trash.

A horn goes off & Spider-Man lifts his head

Spider-Man
- Damn! im supposed to meet Gwen at Harrys Regaurdless im not supposed to be there...

Spider-Man jumps up & swings off.

CUT TO:
Spider-Man lands on the wall at harrys & see's Gwen with Harry as he lays in his bed sick.

Spider-Man dresses to his formal Peter Parker wear & enters the building.

Peter
-(says too his self) Stay cool man your not allowed here dont get caugh....

Norman Osborn
- What do you think your doing here young man?

Peter
- I...i...i was just comeing to see if Harry was ok...
Norman Osborn
- Your not welcome here ok get that in your head & get out you have caused me nothing but missery (Peter flashes back too him & Goblins fight)....GET OUT!!!

Gwen suddenly comes out the door.

Gwen
-Peter?!?

Peter
- Hey pretty lady! I kinda figured you were here.

Norman Osborn
-As of now you two are not welcome here.

FADE TO:
Peter & Gwen are now outside talking.

Gwen
- I feel so bad for Harry , Peter.

Peter
- I know Gwen but there's nothing we can do.

Gwen
- But why is Mr.Osborn always on your case?

Peter
- I dont know Gwen.

CUT TO:

Norman Osborn in his home office.On the Phone.

Norman Osborn
- Whata you mean the stock has dropped?!?

(listens to the person)


Norman osborn
- do you know what this will do to me??

(again)

Norman Osborn
- No ok ...bye


Harry then enters the room


Harry
- Dad? Whats going on?

Norman Osborn
- Nothing to concern yourself with Harry.Now get some sleep son.

Harry
- I was worried about you...i..dont ..feel..wel

Harry collapses & Norman calls the doctor.

FADE TO:

Spider-Man is maken his way to the daily bugle. He lands on the bugle.


Spider-Man
-wow never been wore out that much not even earlier i think a virus is just getting to me.


CUT TO:

Now peter Parker enters the bugle & goes straight to Robies office.

Robbie
-(set off screen) You dont look to well Peter look like yopu have the flu....


Peter
- I guess so Mr.Robertson...I guess im just not your picture of health.

Robbie
-Our lovely publisher might just throw you in jail for that. (chuckles)

Peter
-Thanks Robbie.

Robbie
- You ok pete?

Peter
-Im ok Just dont feel well.I need a warm bed...

Jamesom
-(off screen) Parker!!! get yor diseased self outta here tell him robbie!

Robbie
- Sorry pete but ya heard the man.

CUT TO:

Peter
-Well i guess this will do for the pics.Jameson will be upset over the pics of Spidey but,Spidey does sell papers.Right now though spidey feels like the only way to get home.

CUT TO:

Norman Osborn is excusing the doctor from checking harry.As Osborn turns he begins to hollucinate Spider-Man being there & goes at him.


Norman Osborn
-Spider-Man what are you doing here??? Came to gloat have you?

Norman jumps at ehat he thinks is Spider-Man.

Norman Osborn
-ILL KILL YOU!!!!!

Norman storms out of his house & into the day.

CUT TO:

Norman finds his way too his old goblin hide out after he remembers everything.


Norman Osborn
-Spiderman is my enemy hes Peter Parker & he shall pay for what has happened to my son!!!! For i am the Green Goblin!!!! hehehehehahahaha

Green Goblin takes off after Peters true love Gwen Stacey.

CUT TO:


Gwen Stacey is sitting at Peters home as Aunt May isnt home .Green Goblin rises in the background & snatches her.


FADE TO:

Spider-Man swings his way home he makes his way in through his window & notices gwens purse with a goblin bomb on it he quickly picks it up.

Spider-Man
-No! No!...It cant be!!!!! he musta been after me but found my Gwen instead!!

Spider-Man darts out & swings through the city....as he stops on one building.

Spider-Man
- God!! I cant find her!!! God help me i cant find her!!!

Spider-Man swings on until he reaches the G.W. bridge & see's goblin in the distance.

Spider-Man
- Figures Norman would find somethin with his name in it for his sickness!!

Spider-Man swings closer to the goblin & at a small distance....


Green Goblin
-Spider-man!!! or...should i say mister Parker.I have your girl up here my friend i trust you understand what that means!!!

Spider-Man
- You tell me Goblin.

Green Goblin
- You have been an annoyance in my spine & if you dont leave permanately Gwen Stacey shall Die!!!!

Spider-Man
-That cuts it pumpkin boy! Up to now ive been real friendly considering your problems & all that!!But buster when you threaten my girl..The KID GLOVES ARE OFF!!!

Green Goblin flys closer to Spider-Man & launches a Pumpkin bomb at him.
As the fight Goblin bashes him down with his glider.


Green Goblin
-Your end is near spiderman cant you see that?!?!?

Spider-Man moves around shoots a web that ataches to the glider & puches goblin off.

Spider-Man then rushes over to Gwen & picks her up.

Spider-Man
-she looks in shock.....Dont you worry baby ill get you home!

Green Goblin
- Wrong Spider-Man you wont get her anywhere!

Goblin knocks Gwen from Spider-Man's hands.

Spider-Man
-Gwen!!!! NO!!!!!!

Spider-Man shoots a web after as it catches her by the leg & her neck snaps wich in unheard to Spider-Man.

Spider-Man pulls her up to him.

Spider-Man
-I did it!! Spider powers i love you!! Not only am i the most im easily the most versatile!Who else could have saved a girl from a certain dea....Gwen?


Spider-Man checks her.

Spider-Man
- Hey whats wrong? I saved you...you cant be ...no no! Dont be dead i dont want you to be dead!
I save you honey dont you see?? (underbreathe) i saved you...



Green goblin (off screen)
-ROMANTIC IDIOT (Spider-Man turns his head) she was dead before your webbing reached her!!

Camera focuses on goblin.

Green Goblin
-A fall from that height would have killed anyone ! but my friend death will be easier for you!!!

Spider-Man
-Thats where your wrong Goblin! You're the creep thats gonna pay!! Im going to kill you slow & painfully & when you beg ill remind you that you killed the girl i love!!


Spider-Man stands with gwen in his arms.

Green Goblin
-She's dead .The girl you love is dead & there's nothin you or no other hero can do to revive her!

Spider-Man
- Don't count on it Goblin there's only one man is gonna die today & mister it wont be me!

Spider-Man swings Gwen down to street level shouting.

Spider-Man
-Incase you forgot you killed Gwen Stacey she didnt just die...YOU KILLED HER!!!

Green Goblin
-Your an inbecile your remarks mean nothing to me

Spider-Man quickly recovers as the goblin makes his way & gone. He notices sirens as he swings down to Gwen.


As they come closer Spiderman picks her up.


Spider-Man
-Dont worry Gwen i wont let anyone hurt you. It'll be as it was before dont worry....

Flash backs of Peter & Gwen go through as Spider-Man holds her body closer.

He also remember Spider-Man flawed their true happiness.

Through all the flashbacks Spider-Man has made his way home.


Peter sets in room with his mask off & starts crying.


Peter
-I coulda saved her i...(cries more)....I FAILED!!!! Why does this keep happening! First Uncle Ben now Gwen....my baby is gone (cries more)


Then peters head rises slowly.

Peter
-I'll kill you Osborn!



Peter then puts his street clothes over his suit & exits.


FADE TO.


Peter is now at the Osbornes house.He enters.



Peter
-Spider sense didnt go off? Normans not here?But good ole Harry is hes the one i wana talk too.

Peter makes his way to harrys room.

Harry is startle & looks around to see Peter.

Harry
-Your not my father?! Peter is that you??

Peter
-Still trippen on that acid huh Harry?!

Peter just turns his back & walks out.

CUT TO:

Spider-Man is swinging through town.

Spider-Man
-Ill find you Norman no matter what it takes!


CUT TO:

Spider-Man makes his way to the Bugle & as he is about to enter Robbie Robertsons office he hears him.



Robbie
-(offscreen) Gwen Stacey..dead? i cant belive it i've known that girl sience..i just cant belive it....


Spider-Man crawls through his window.


Spider-Man
-belive it Robertson...


Robbie
-Do you know how dangerous...


Spider-Man
-How dangerous me being is? Yeah & i bet the press has blamed it on me?



Robbie
-First you tell me...

Spider-Man
- No time...does Norman Osborne own any warehouses local?


Robbie
-Yes he owns The warehouse on 23rd ...he was just seen there around 45 minutes ago...

Spider-Man
-Thanks Robbie....remind me to buy you a java one day...i really owe you for this one.


Spider-Man climbs out the window .


He swings down until his chest spider is up to the screen.

CUT TO:


Norman sets in his goblin suit with his mask off.

Norman
- He'll be here i can sense it.


As soon as the words are out of his mouth he hears a noise.


Green Goblin
-(pulls mask on) good he's here.



Goblin gets on his glider.


Green Goblin
-Now time to attack him from the side hehe...


Spider-Man tackles Goblin.

Spider-Man
-Wrong goblin!!!! Tonights my game & we play by my rules!!!!\

Green Goblin
-My weapons are of many wall crawler & what to you have those puny webshooter ehehhehee

Spider-Man stopms down on the goblin glider & crushes it up.

Spider-Man
--Enough with your damn toys goblin!


Spider-man slings the glider.


Green Goblin
-My glider!! Oh youll pay for that Parker!


Spider-Man
-Mister are you living in the same universe? you killed my girl goblin & your mad over a basement toy?

Spider-Man punches goblin down.


Spider-Man
-Lets get some things straight punk! A human life is worth more then a toy!


Spider-man hits Goblin again & as he does Goblin gives Spider-Man an electric touch wich paralizes him & causes him to colapse to his knees.


Spider-Man
- (mumbles)Need to be more careful( his spider sense goes off but hes to paralized to move at the moment)...uh oh


Spider-Man looks up as Goblin kicks him in the face.

Green Goblin
-You were stupid to think you could beat me again..hahahah!


Spider-man rises slowly but is sucker punched back down by Goblin.


Green Goblin
-All this stupidity over some worthless girl..you really are foolish.


Spider-Man with a busrt of energytackles Goblin & presses him up against the wall.

Spider-Man
-Thats it! Your talking about my girl! The one i loved! do you know what that means?? I loved her! You scum!


Spider-man continues to hit the Goblin repetively until he notices he's barely moveing.

Spider-Man
- What on earth am i doing?

Spider-Man steps back & puts his hand on his face.


Spider-Man
-Another moment or so i coulda killed him.I would have been a murderer.



As Spider-Man is not watching goblin hits a button on his belt.


Spider-Man
- On your feet Goblin! Your jail bate.


Greeb Goblin
-Sorry Im afraid i have an appointment else where.


Spider-Man
-In case you havent noticed you dont have a choice!

Green Goblin
- Actually i do (he smiles real big).


Spider-Man
-Spider-senses.


Spider-man quikly leaps out of the gliders way as it pierces Goblins chest.

Green Goblin
-AAAGHHHH!!!!!!


Blood flies from Goblin as the glider pierces him back to the wall.

The glider dies out & it & goblin collapse to the floor.


Spider-Man exits the building.


FADE TO:


Spider-man is sitting on a buildind top mask off as tears run down his eyes.


(Over voice) Spider-Man
-After all this i thought seeing goblin die would make me feel better..but i just fell empty inside.Gwen is dead ..but who is to blame me or goblin....(scene cuts over to Peter in a grave yard)..I cant bring her back so i'll never know.....I'm dead inside partially.....( cuts to Spider-Man fighting off a bunch of thugs) Spider-Man lives on in me but will always be in vain....(scene cuts to a hand writing) But all can think is how much i loved that blonde haired girl...(writing comes out to say "Dear Gwen" then the hand dops down a picture of Gwen)



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Napisano 08 November 2005 - 20:18

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Spider-man is sitting on a buildind top mask off as tears run down his eyes.


........it's so sad ;)

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Napisano 08 November 2005 - 20:50

OK, wybacz nadmierna agresje - po prostu zycie w stresie i nawal roboty sprawiaja, ze ludzie roznie odbieraja dane rzeczy :huh:

Jesli tak - przepraszam, ale na przyszlosc badz konkretniejsza.

Nie znam hiszpanskiego, moze kiedys przetlumacze na polski albo Gunganski ;)
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Napisano 09 November 2005 - 18:34

No coz... Harry wyglada, jakby mial tyle lat, co ja :P 'Gwen' ma aparat na zebach, czy oni nawet zdjecia porzadnego nie umieja zrobic?

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[kostium Pajaka zostanie zmieniony]

No ja mysle... Ten jest do dupy :]

No ogolnie, mam nadzieje, ze nie zrobia z tego "Krypty". A scenariusz troche za krotki (tak wyglada :D ), chociaz tez nie czytalem :] No zobaczymy co z tego bedzie... Duzo bylo fanfilmow o Spider-Manie?

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Użytkownik zygmoont dnia Nov 9 2005, 21:34 napisał

No coz... Harry wyglada, jakby mial tyle lat, co ja :D 'Gwen' ma aparat na zebach, czy oni nawet zdjecia porzadnego nie umieja zrobic?

Wczesniejsze byly jeszcze gorsze :P



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No ogolnie, mam nadzieje, ze nie zrobia z tego "Krypty". A scenariusz troche za krotki (tak wyglada :P ), chociaz tez nie czytalem :] No zobaczymy co z tego bedzie... Duzo bylo fanfilmow o Spider-Manie?

Eee... Jeden w 1992 - "Green goblin Last Stand" traktujacy o... smierci Gwen [opis Dawidosa u mnie i, w ktoryms Peter Parker's Datapad na SMO], a drugi calkiem jakis denny, w ktorym kobitka bawila sie w Ezekiela i dyskutowala z Spideyem o jego podstawach. W drodze jest ten, o ktorym wyzej i polski "Czlowiek-pajak" [zapowiedz u mnie]. Mozliwe, ze byly inne, ale skoro nic o nich nie slyszalem, znaczy, ze godne uwagi nie sa.
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Użytkownik Jackson dnia Nov 9 2005, 20:39 napisał

skoro nic o nich nie slyszalem, znaczy, ze godne uwagi nie sa.

ojej...brzydkie generalizowanie. :P
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ojej...brzydkie generalizowanie.  :D

Moze i generalizowanie, ale zazwyczaj tak jest, ze ciekawsze pozycje zdobywaja popularnosc, a o innych ludzie zapominaja... Mozliwe, ze posrod tych nieznanych mi fanfilmow sa jakies artystyczne perelki wyjasniajace jaki jest sens zycia, ale szczerze w to watpie, bo o wiekszosci fanfilmow wiem :P
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Napisano 10 November 2005 - 22:02

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Mozliwe, ze posrod tych nieznanych mi fanfilmow sa jakies artystyczne perelki wyjasniajace jaki jest sens zycia,



Jackson, a który z nich wyjasnia ci sens zycia..? :P

To byla ironia majaca podkreslic niewielkie szanse na to, iz posrod malo znanych filmow jest cos ciekawego :D - Gungan Evil
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